Frightful stairwell, blood splash, creak and swing to scattered envelopes,
Metal door, surprise, there are apartments up there.
Planter pots like soup bowls, flowers rim to rim,
Train cars slide on magic rails near carriages drawn by horse.
Head down, steady stride, black coffee too hot to sip.
Bus driver, eye contact and smile, reminds me not to forget.
Book in hand, I watch the same buildings, same speed,
The same stops claim patrons, drop them corner, city, wide.
Afternoon, buildings in reverse, grey men talk inaudibly.
Screech and stop, business district, earpiece cell phone,
Glass towers, valet, red hand to green man, birdcalls,
White—noise, the afternoon sheds a subtle smile.
Tattered fatigues and poorly written desperation, I carry
No cash with wallet full of ones. No eye contact and smile,
Don’t forget your Vets. Those with songs to sing I praise, Elliot
And his cello, songs I know, those I don’t, prelude to my show.
Alcohol, spit kissed gin, tired and lacking sleep. We shoot whiskey
And sip darts, triple black and bull’s-eye red, know our numbers
But don’t have to, paint our picture with the feathered end.
Connect the scattered dots, fill in the crooked lines.
Stairwell gaped, heavy door ajar, a welcome home of stampeding
Third floor—remember little, think of less—wrapped in blurry blanket.
Blink to alarm, tired and lacking sleep, neon lit hallway buzzes
The same color as the night before.
2 comments:
goddamn this is good man. i've danced through these words one drunken, sequentially blurred night and learned which leg to lead with when throwing darts. issac was there. and so was ben-or whatever his name was- after he ditched his girlfriend's new haircut. yeah...thats right, you also tried to convince him to break up with her at one point. i got pissed off from being too drunk and uncomfortable and rode my bike back to ashley's.
also, i relate with the 'poorly written desperation.' it seems to be all i muster when i voluntarely write words on papers.
Hey buddy. THere are some very cool visuals here. And very personal observations. It is cool how all of us that have read this relate to a memory in it."I sip darts and throw whiskey" I loved it. I can only say that you might want to mess with the structure and aesthetics to pronounce different areas stronger. I think that letting a poem breathe can really set a good tone for the reader. Miss you ass hole.
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